User Loser (poem)

[Trillian]

She came
Her orgasm was as
Sour as the expression
On her maybe-pretty face
And as bitter
As the broken heart
That she made of herself a victim
Blame Mommy; she called her a parasite
Blame Daddy; he never loved her
It\'s not the fact she uses people
Because she\'s uninspired
It\'s not the fact she let him down
The one time he did as she asked
Her parents don\'t know her she says
It\'s their fault
Don\'t blame her
She\'s not a loser
Just because she can\'t
Go anywhere
Do anything
Be anyone
Without someone to bitch about
And someone to bitch with
Out with the old
In with the new
And so the cycle
Repeats
She came
And the pinnacle of her orgasm
The very height of her friendship
Was only ever sour
And leaves a bitter aftertaste
She cries for friendship
But mourns her title
Which even she admits
Was meaningless
Just like she was
In the end.

[Fell]

Wow... I actually really like it. The prose is a little sticky in some places, but the idea more than makes up for it. Also, some of the images? <3

Thank you for sharing. It reminds me of a couple people I know. =_= ; P