Your creative block is very obviously directly related to your situation now. I recommend using writing as a way to get all the shit out before you can try to be creative. If you have a blog or some kind of place to write down your thoughts, you should use that and write down everything you feel. It can be good self-therapy, to not bottle it up and write down all your anger and frustration.
As for the improvements; I can see improvements in your writing already, Raff. I\'m not a teacher so the only way I can help you is as you write by offering my opinion and making suggestions, via critique.
You\'ve put your story \'The Elegant Life of a Half-Demon\' in the RPC Library and not in the Critiquing section, so I won\'t critique it. If you wish to reconsider this, PM me and I\'ll move it.
I joined a writer\'s group a long time ago and when I submitted a story they critiqued every sentence and many concepts. Their critique was constructive but I was humiliated. Next week, next meeting, I came back much to their surprise and they congratulated me on it because I proved I wanted to learn. We can\'t be sensitive about our work. They helped me a long way, I saw major improvements in my writing after a few weeks.
What I do at Roleplay City when I PM with suggestions and pointers is a little bit what they did for me but I remember the humiliation so I don\'t go overboard with it - this is supposed to be a place to have fun after all.
