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A Demon Walks Into a Bar
« on: February 05, 2020, 11:18:57 AM »
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Two hours after sunset, a woman wrapped in an oversized brown coat pushed open the doors to the White Rabbit.  She peered around timidly, eyes searching behind the bar for an employee.  Tucking a lock of grey hair behind an ear, she approached the end nearest the door and smiled at the hulking man behind the bar.  She waited patiently, wrapping the coat tightly around her as though to ward off a chill, obscuring a gently glowing necklace peaking just beneath her dusty rose sweater.  Some patrons gave her looks, the closest wrinkling their noses at the strong perfume scent following her like a cloud.

"Excuse me, dearie," her voice was quiet, but she made no effort to speak louder over the surrounding din.  The man at the bar, who was less a man and more a beast, known to most as Manuel, approached her with a narrow gaze.  This woman laughably stood out in this sort of establishment, which was suspicious enough, but there wasn't anything else alarming about her appearance.  She did not make any indication of noticing just how out of place she seemed, and her smile widened appreciatively when she had his attention.

"I need to speak directly to District Leader McCloud," her voice fell quieter, "It is urgent." 
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Re: A Demon Walks Into a Bar
« Reply #1 on: February 05, 2020, 12:02:57 PM »
Manuel was busy opening. Lisa-Joe was out looking for clues of Sam's whereabouts, and Jake was down in his quarters, trying to locate her through their bond. Manuel was suspicious of most people, but secretly wished that prissy Evans guy was here. There wasn't the best district representation at the moment. Maria was gone. Luke had vanished for good it seemed. Tyler was out tylering. Manuel was really the most senior person around, and that made him anxious. He'd just balanced the books for the downstairs bar, when a revolting smell entered his nostrils. It smelt burnt, cloudy and pungent. He whirled around to face the strange figure, and knew at over seven hundred that something was off. He approached and gruffly grunted, "whada ya wan?"

When the strange women requested Jake, stating it was urgent, Manuel assumed this being had information about Sam. He didn't trust the smell though, and so he stalled for a moment, considering his options. He held up a finger, adding in a similar grunt, "hold up." He moved to a phone and made a call.

"You're needed, Rabbit first floor bar. Says it's urgent."

With that he hung up, and grabbed an impatient looking Brujah girl with headphones and pink hair. "Go make sure his royal highness knows not to keep his guest waiting," he instructed. Amy looked to the old woman, and then back to Manuel.

"Seriously? Her? He's going through a lot right now."

"Just do it."

"Maria's my boss now, not you." She pulled out a magazine.

"Ughhhh, watch the fucking bar. Can you do that?" He stomped off towards the elevator. Amy looked at the old woman, and then slowly moved behind it to tend. She tossed a coaster in front of her, and placed a clean rag around her wrist.

"We have a special import beer, Belgian, not too dark. We're also known for our special salty Bloody Mary's."


Manuel made his way through the warrens, stomping along in frustration at how mouthy Amy was getting. He'd have a talk with Maria about her. She was pulling too much weight as her assistant. Manuel scared off a lot of the younger security teams, his temper and scowl being a constant force. He reached Jake's door and knocked forcefully, sending loud booms through the tunnels.

Jake answered the door, looking bleary eyed and smelling like viate. "What," he said softly. Manuel explained the strange woman, the smells, and her seeming out of nature appearance. He hypothesized it had something to do with Sam, at which point Jake softened into understanding.

"Bring her to the conference room. I'll be twenty minutes."

The door was slammed shut, and Manuel was left staring at wood. "Little shit," he mumbled before using his Celerity and taking the stairs back up. He'd escort the woman downstairs to the conference room to wait for Jake. 

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Re: A Demon Walks Into a Bar
« Reply #2 on: February 05, 2020, 12:44:03 PM »
The woman smiled gently at the girl.  "Thank you, sweetheart, but I won't be staying long."

And she was correct.  No sooner had Manuel disappeared, he returned.  The woman seemed relieved when he approached, gruffly declaring that he'd escort her into the conference room.  How delightful!  She beamed cutely and followed at a quick shuffle. 

While she was led, the woman looked around with wide black eyes, making appropriate gasps of surprise at technological defenses.  It seemed that she enjoyed herself, taking in the scenery as though Manuel were showing her around the city's tourist attractions.  When they reached the conference room, she fell silent, a grave expression overtaking her features.  Before Manuel left her, she grasped at his hand with her tiny wrinkled ones as if she needed it to stabilize her footing.

"Thank you, dearie, for being so prompt," she gave his hand an affectionate squeeze.  Then, she settled into a chair facing the door to wait for Jake McCloud.

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Re: A Demon Walks Into a Bar
« Reply #3 on: February 05, 2020, 01:21:20 PM »
Jake pulled on a black silk button up, jeans, and boots. His hair was clean but untidy. His nails were painted with a coat of clear polish. He placed the Blood Ring on his finger, throwing on a few other gawdy looking rings. He'd made it his habit to hide the ring's prominence. To cover the clotted blood under his eyes, he pulled out a tube of eye liner. It had been a while since he'd done his eyes. It used to be a nightly ritual, war paint, and tribal markings. There were Anarch marks. Manuel had mentioned a funny smell, and so Jake grabbed his sword too. He hadn't been carrying it lately, but it called out to him, like an old friend. It begged to be held. He felt safer for it's presence in his hand, and he exited his suite upon retrieving it.

The District Leader texted Chef for a blood pack, and had it brought to him a few feet outside the conference room. He quickly drained it into a glass and gulped it down cold. He shivered, but felt a flush of freshness to his cheeks. His hand was more steady. With one final look down the hall, he strut into the room, seeing his audience immediately.  Her appearance was offsetting.

"My man told me you had urgent information." His tone was blunt, disaffected and tight. "I'm District Leader McCloud. You are?"

His arms lay cross his chest as he waited for answers.
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Re: A Demon Walks Into a Bar
« Reply #4 on: February 05, 2020, 01:27:01 PM »
The old woman grinned, something too wide to fit her face, eyes bulging a bit past the confines of their eye sockets.  The next moment Jake blinked, the one who sat before him was no longer an old woman.

Va'tamal, arms crossed over his chest, sat back against the chair and inhaled deeply.

"Call Damien."  He pulled a pack of cigarettes from the inner pocket of the brown coat and placed one between his lips.  He lifted his eyes to meet Jakes, noting that he hadn't made a move for his phone yet.

"Go on, I'll wait."  In a flash of fire the tip of the cigarette ignited and he pulled a long drag from it.  "Tell him to hurry here.  We have business to discuss."
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Re: A Demon Walks Into a Bar
« Reply #5 on: February 05, 2020, 01:32:44 PM »
Jake's face betrayed a smile. He knew instantly who this was. Who else would call for Damien by name? Who else would come into his district bold enough to make such a glaring demand? Jake pulled out a cigarette as well, making no moves to call anyone yet. He let a silence fill the room as he blew out a puff of smoke.

"Laurent I assume," he asked rhetorically. "Give me a single reason why I shouldn't kill you right now, or tear Rachel's location from your brain, and then kill you."

He grabbed an ash tray and flicked off the end of his cigarette. "Go on. I'll wait."
Be a sadist. Now matter how sweet and innocent your leading characters, make awful things happen to them — in order that the reader may see what they are made of.
- Kurt Vonnegut Jr.


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Re: A Demon Walks Into a Bar
« Reply #6 on: February 05, 2020, 01:38:51 PM »
The shadow demon grinned, shaking his head softly from side to side.  Either Jake was bluffing, or the rumors of magical protection preventing violence were false.  It wasn't enough to throw Laurent off his Game.

He made a show of checking his wrist as if there were a watch.  There was none.

"You are running out of time, Jake."  He clicked his tongue against the roof of his mouth.  "And you can't afford the risk of losing something I am willing to give before I give it."  A dramatic sigh puffed past his lips with a billow of smoke.

"Call Damien."  He repeated.
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Re: A Demon Walks Into a Bar
« Reply #7 on: February 05, 2020, 01:43:15 PM »
"It's District Leader McCloud, Va'tamal," Jake said politely. Jake considered handling this himself. The urge to take off the ring and tear about this fool's mind was overwhelming. However, that would reveal something he shouldn't, and if Rachel's life was truly on a timer, Damien would never forgive him for stalling. That being understood, Jake began to scheme. He wouldn't be dictated to by some common thug.

He pulled out his phone, and dialed for Damien. After two rings, he heard Damien's voice.

"He's here, and he wants to talk," Jake said somberly, placing the conversation on speaker and putting the phone down on the table next to himself.
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Re: A Demon Walks Into a Bar
« Reply #8 on: February 05, 2020, 02:38:01 PM »
Around ten in the morning the dot on the tracking app finally stopped moving about, remaining for hours at the same location - Glitter Beach. It was the only moment of the day that he felt hopeful -- until the dot didn't move more. The longer the dot remained unmoving, the darker his thoughts grew. By early afternoon, he was sure that she was dead, laying on the beach. To confirm his suspicions, he turned on the human news and kept it low as he made his calls and did whatever searching he could from his house.

At four in the afternoon, Damien heard a whine and a soft scratch at the door. He leapt up from the office chair and pressed his ear to the front door, extending himself mentally.

Delilah and no one else.

A great swell of joy pushed tears to his eyes and Damien carefully opened the door to let the dog in, avoiding the sunlight that flooded the house by standing behind the door. He slammed it shut and went to cradle his dog, checking over her fur for injuries. There were knicks all over her, her coat covered in brambles and thorns and dried blood. She cried out when he pressed on her ribs too heavily and avoided him when he touched a very tender back leg. When he released her, she went straight for the water bowl with a significant limp that worried him. He would have to call the vet to come look at her.

By the time the sun dipped under the horizon, Damien was waiting on Pierre to arrive so they could both go search the beach. He tried not to think about the likelihood that Rachel was dead - after all nothing had shown up on the local media. Perhaps there was hope after all.

Damien drove them across the city to the beach as soon as Pierre had arrived, barely talking to his fledge. Everytime he opened his mouth to speak to him, Damien could feel the fear and anger bubble up in him, and he couldn't afford to give it anymore space than it already had.

They would find Rachel. They had to.

When they arrived at the beach, he followed the green dot on his app, eyes wide and scanning the beach for any sign that she had been there. He neither picked up her scent nor saw anyone that even resembled her. Damien was losing hope when he caught sight of something on one of the park benches nearby - a traffic cone. It was enough to draw him in, looking around as if it were some kind of trap. Pierre followed at a distance, allowing his sire the space he may need to maneuver, should the need arise.

Damien went closer, but an idea was beginning to form in his head. Sure enough, as he approached the traffic cone, he saw nothing out of the ordinary - until he lifted the orange cone. Beneath the hollow center was the small device that Damien had given to Rachel just yesterday. Disbelief surged up through him and he checked his phone to be sure. Both dots were in the same location.

Laurent (or some passerby) must have found the tracker and placed it here for Damien to find.

With an exasperated shout, he threw the tracker into the ocean, useless as it was now. Pierre stood silently by him and only interfered with Damien's frustration when he lunged for the bench and tried to wrench it from the concrete foundation in which it sat. Had it been anyone else, Damien would have used all of his strength to break free from that bear hug and kill whoever held him back. It was because that person was Pierre that Damien fought only briefly against the hold before giving into the other's strength and sagged in his despair after a few furious moments.

"I've fucked everything up, Jean-Luc," he whispered hoarsely, no air left in his chest. He felt as if he were being dragged into the sands and he wished for nothing more than for the Earth to just open up and drag him to Hell. The roll and spray of the ocean stood only as an ironic reminder of his loss.

"No you haven't," his fledge responded, still maintaining his hold on him, though it softened as Damien relaxed his violent impulse. "You did everything you could for her." Something about his tone sounded too final, too complete - as if the search for Rachel was over. He gathered breath and was about to give Pierre a taste of his anger for suggesting such a thing when his phone rang. Anger forgotten, he dug the phone out of his pocket, barely glancing at the name on the screen. For a moment, he stupidly believed it would be Rachel. Before he could even answer the phone, Jake's voice came through the line with a chilling message.

Damien swatted Pierre away, knowing that he had heard those words as well. Blood filled his ears in a rage as he processed Jake's words. Everything inside of him turned to fire and Damien started for the car. If Laurent was at the Rabbit, Damien could kill him and find Rachel. He didn't stop to think about why Laurent might be at the White Rabbit, those details seeming superfluous.

"Laurent is at the Rabbit? How the hell did he even get in?"

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Re: A Demon Walks Into a Bar
« Reply #9 on: February 05, 2020, 02:45:42 PM »
Since we are going by proper names

"Guillaume deToulouse," Laurent croned, taking his time to pronounce each syllable.  Leaning forward in his chair, he stubbed the cigarette out on the tabletop.  A chuckle reverberated in his chest. 

"Come to the Rabbit.  I want to speak face to face."  He crossed his arms over his chest again and leaned back.  "Quickly now, you haven't got a lot of time!"
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« Reply #10 on: February 05, 2020, 02:50:55 PM »
"Enough of this," Jake said, throwing up his arms in disgust. "State you leverage. You've done nothing but talk. Proof she's alive. Proof you have her. Proof she's unharmed. Now!"

Jake leaned forward, and while his youthful appearance should've made him seem silly for being so forceful, there was something undeniably cruel in his eyes. He was almost like a Dark Angel, beautiful and terrible. 

"Damien, I do suggest you join us," he said into the phone. He listened to ascertain what state of mind his friend was in.
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Re: A Demon Walks Into a Bar
« Reply #11 on: February 05, 2020, 02:55:10 PM »
The demon's head tilted sideways, unnaturally far. 

"Would I really bother with this risk if she were not alive?"  He scoffed, and leaned toward the phone again.  "The more he speaks, the less I will give you."
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« Reply #12 on: February 05, 2020, 03:23:55 PM »
Damien and Pierre exchanged a look as Pierre started up the Lexus and peeled out of the parking lot of the beach. He could hear the pleasure in the demon's voice as he spoke with a certain amount of confidence. He didn't wonder how he had gotten Damien's human name, though his mind wandered heatedly about the possibilities. That was unimportant for the moment.

"Jake," Damien said through grit teeth, hating himself for playing any of the demon's games while keeping his expression as neutral as he possibly could. He knew he should have called Laurent's bluff and stayed where he was, but nothing made sense anymore. He couldn't lose Rachel.

I love you, I love you, I love you, she had thought. Did she know that he had picked up that message?

"Shark tank," he coded to Jake. It was a phrase he had used to help Jake control his temper during the election. It was a reminder to contain his emotions and respond when necessary to survive encounters that would otherwise try to tear him apart, to keep his thoughts to himself and observe. Damien hoped he would get the message.

"Why should I trust anything you say?" He asked the demon with an even voice. "You spend years avoiding me and now you want to talk?"

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Re: A Demon Walks Into a Bar
« Reply #13 on: February 05, 2020, 03:29:06 PM »
"Do you have another option I am unaware of?"  Laurent laughed, then sighed.  His gaze lifted from the phone to Jake, who seemed to quench a bit of his ire.  There was a pause on the other end and Laurent grinned.

"I didn't think so."  His hand darted into his coat for another cigarette.  "Hurry, sweet Guillaume."  Leaning forward, he pressed his finger against the screen of the phone to hang up the call.  Satisfied, he put his feet up on the table and crossed them.
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« Reply #14 on: February 05, 2020, 03:47:05 PM »
Jake heard Damien's code word, and realized he was well on his way to losing his temper completely. Damien was still mentoring him even now. As he calmed himself, he observed more than when he'd been demanding information. He watched as Laurent stayed purposefully vague. He wanted Damien in person, and clearly wasn't interested in saying anything until that time. Time. That was a weakness. Laurent would wait for Damien's arrival. He wasn't going anywhere.

The second thing Jake learned, was that Laurent was smugger than even Lazarus. He began to doubt that Rachel was in as much danger as Laurent alluded. He wanted this meeting. He'd seemingly spent years planning it. He wouldn't throw it away over nothing. It did make Jake believe his last answer regarding her being alive. It was clear now that her being alive was a part of the plan. Arrogance and pride beamed from him as the demon placed his feet on the coffee table. Jake knew what a weakness arrogance could be.

"Seeing as how my voice only upsets you," Jake mocked, "I'll take my leave until Damien arrives. Don't try and go anywhere. You're not the first shadow demon who's inconvenienced me. I made changes."

With that he grabbed his sword, and stomped out in a full tantrum. Once on the other side of the door, he dropped the act, and found Benny, Manuel and Lisa-Joe all on the other side. Manuel's call had not been to Jake, but to Lisa-Joe. She'd understood urgency in Manuel's voice few others would've detected, and  returned to the Rabbit. Benny had been watching the cameras and realized an important fact. They knew where Laurent lived. Manuel had been sticking around as a first responder.

"Lisa-Joe, go in there and watch him," Jake instructed. "Manuel, wait here on the other side of the door. Don't let Damien enter without me. Benny, follow me."

His soldiers all complied. Lisa-Joe slipped into the room. She wore flannel and leggings, and her hair was in a pony tail. She sat at the table. "Speak to me and I'll break your fucking face. One word. I mean it." With that she pulled out her phone and opened Candy Crush. Manuel assumed his position, arms crossed like a proper sentry.

Jake and Benny vanished into the tunnels, heading towards Jake's apartment.
Be a sadist. Now matter how sweet and innocent your leading characters, make awful things happen to them — in order that the reader may see what they are made of.
- Kurt Vonnegut Jr.


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