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Re: A Demon Walks Into a Bar
« Reply #15 on: February 06, 2020, 11:43:21 AM »
When the line went dead and Damien's ears were left ringing with Laurent's laughter, he nearly threw the phone through the windshield of Pierre's car. He spat out a string of curses in the first languages that rolled off his tongue, not bothering to make sense of with them. A deep, hollow silence filled the car as Pierre raced through the city and Damien seethed.

"This could be a trap, you know," Pierre said cautiously after a few moments. His sire remained quiet. "It probably is."

"No one can get into the White Rabbit with the intention to kill anyone inside," Damien reminded him with a tone of annoyance, though he wasn't pointed it at his son. No, Damien had let Laurent get under his skin and as he sat idle in the passenger seat watching the dark city pass by with only a flicker of streetlights, he tried to come to terms with why. The demon's words kept playing on repeat in his head -- sweet Guillaume -- until Damien's hands started to shake.

What was this all about? Why hadn't Laurent moved on from his pursuit of Rachel? Did he track all of his former girls down like this? Would he kill Rachel now? Damien doubted it. What was more likely was that he would return her to the way things were for a while, then kill her when he was done. Anger rotted his stomach into nausea.

"So what's the plan?" Pierre asked, glancing over at him with a worried expression.

He sighed. "We talk to Laurent and find out what we can."

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As Pierre pulled up to the curb, Damien stepped onto the pavement with the car still in motion, the rubber sole of his shoes skidding briefly on the asphalt. His chest felt tight and the shaking in his hands had moved solidly up his arms until his entire body felt engulfed by his rage. He had quelled that fury by imagining all the ways that he would kill Laurent when he saw him - complete with rending flesh between neck and head apart in the goriest of fashions. With the speed that age had provided him, Damien made his way to the front door and placed his hand on the handle.

Something hit him square in the chest, stopping him in his tracks. He released the handle aghast, unable to explain what exactly had stopped him. When he reached again for the handle, a similar reaction, only this time he stumbled backwards from the door. He could see nothing, and yet he was prevented from entering, as if a sentry had stepped into his path and pushed him. Instinctually he scanned for the mental walls of a strong one, someone with the ability to keep him out of the club, but came up empty-handed. Pierre approached as Damien cursed at the club, stumbling backwards onto his knee as he made one final attempt.

"The Rabbit's magic," Pierre said, steadying his sire as Damien rose and dusted the grime from his jeans. "You have to calm down."

"I'm going to feel his skull collapse within my hands," Damien murmured darkly, staring at the door of the White Rabbit. He jerked himself out of Pierre's grip and walked around, calming himself. Pierre was right - emotion couldn't be his companion if he had any hope of saving Rachel. He scolded himself and tried to feel the connection between himself and the ground, but his anger and terror simmered on despite his best efforts. Never before had he been so distracted by his emotions that he couldn't focus on centering himself.

With difficulty, he banished thoughts of killing Laurent from his mind, replacing them instead with the importance of Rachel's smile, the curve of her hip beneath their sheets as she slept, the way she always filled his phone with pictures of her with Delilah. He sighed and tried the door to the Rabbit again. This time, the door opened with ease and allowed both vampires to enter unresisted.

His eyes searched the bar immediately, sending out a mental pulse to take the temperature of the bar. He looked at the bartender. "Where is he?" He demanded, scaring the girl who was wiping the bar. She managed to point towards the elevator near Lisa-Joe's office and Damien wasted no time in making his way down into the Warrens.

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Re: A Demon Walks Into a Bar
« Reply #16 on: February 06, 2020, 11:59:06 AM »
Laurent did not bother acknowledging Jake's exit line, an amused expression on his face as he watched the vampire storm out of the conference room.  He did wonder who the other shadow demon was, knowing of only one who would be so confrontational.  The thought widened his smile, despite the Burned Bridge there. 

Shadow demon hearing, along with the other senses, was superb.  He knew there were others approaching the door, heard the commands given, and waited patiently as he smoked.  When this Lisa-Joe entered, his eyes roved her form without an ounce of shame.  Her warning nearly had him laughing out loud, but he decided to play along.

Unblinking eyes fixed steadily on her face, glancing her body over occasionally as he pleased.  His mind filled with Delicious imagery of what he would like to do to her, imagining the feeling of his hand gripping her throat, yanking that sweet little pony tail as he fucked her.  She would be a fun one to break, full of piss and vinegar. 

Now he was getting distracted, the ash long on the tip of his cigarette.  He flicked it across the table in her direction, but with only enough force to land in the center, a thin trail of smoke drifting toward the ceiling.  When the door opened, he looked up with a smug smile plastered across his face.
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Re: A Demon Walks Into a Bar
« Reply #17 on: February 06, 2020, 12:14:18 PM »
Manuel felt Damien coming, and a quick call from Amy to a nearby wall phone had let Manuel know he was coming in hot. His fingernails lengthened, and his hands became claws. His eyes turned red. Damien came towards him.

"Jake will take you inside in a moment," he stated with absolution. He feared Damien would test this statement, but luckily, he did not. Manuel kept his claws grown. He suspected he'd need them soon. He became as silent as he always was, and stared down the hallway, not at Damien. Only ninety seconds later, Jake came around the corner. He looked unchanged to Manuel, but Benny was no longer by his side. He greeted Damien with a nod.

"Shark tank," he said softly, to himself, but in this moment, more to Damien. He pointed to the door, and Manuel opened it, letting the pair of them inside.

Lisa-Joe looked to the ash on the table, and the smirking fuckwad before her. She debated making him fear her like no other. Shadow demon or not, her aura was felt when she wanted it to be. However, as she considered this action the door opened. She stood up and moved to the corner, waiting. Jake took another corner, leaving his chair for Damien to take.
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Re: A Demon Walks Into a Bar
« Reply #18 on: February 06, 2020, 12:39:43 PM »
Damien entered the room slowly with a stern expression pressed into his features. His jaw was set firmly clenched behind calm lips and his hands were in his pockets to prevent them from shaking with the rage he felt just below the surface. Pierre stood just outside the door as it closed with a snick behind him.

The pressure in his chest, the ache in his jaw, and the shaking of his hands all intensified the moment he laid eyes on the smirking demon. It was almost impossible to not launch himself across the table at him, to revisit thoughts of rending flesh and plucking eyes from their sockets. For Rachel's sake and the sake of getting something out of this he refrained. He ignored the smug smile, the unnerving brightness of the demon's eyes that followed him as he entered. Damien took his time, adjusting to the feel of the room and extending the heaviness of his aura to oppress everyone. He needed this fool to remember who he was dealing with - a once-emperor.

He let his eyes meet Laurent's as if he were looking upon a man who would be dead soon. As he sat in the chair across the table from the demon, Damien never dropped eye contact. He settled himself with a sigh, crossing his legs and tenting his hands over his abdomen as if this were just one more business transaction. His words, however, were less than friendly.

"What do you want, Va'tamal?" He watched the demon for his reaction, wondering how many knew his actual name.

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Re: A Demon Walks Into a Bar
« Reply #19 on: February 06, 2020, 12:49:52 PM »
There was no outward reaction to the usage of his true name.

"I would like to propose a trade."  He stated simply, smile remaining on his face as he mirrored Damien's body language.  The elder vampire's composure was admirable, but Va'tamal expected that would change soon. 
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Re: A Demon Walks Into a Bar
« Reply #20 on: February 06, 2020, 12:53:44 PM »
Damien's eyes narrowed with his suspicion. "A trade?" The disbelief in his tone was plain and he made no attempt to hide it.

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Re: A Demon Walks Into a Bar
« Reply #21 on: February 06, 2020, 12:57:56 PM »
"Yes, a trade,"  Va'tamal's eyebrows rose.  "I have something you want, you have something I want."
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Re: A Demon Walks Into a Bar
« Reply #22 on: February 06, 2020, 12:59:45 PM »
A flare of anger that he had to swallow before responding in a bitterly curious voice. "And what would that be, hmm?"

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Re: A Demon Walks Into a Bar
« Reply #23 on: February 06, 2020, 01:03:49 PM »
"Your soul,"  The smile dropped and his posture straightened.  "Willingly given in exchange for the love of your life,"  His voice held a mocking tone and he couldn't help but smile. 

"Unharmed," he added, "So long as the exchange goes smoothly." 
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Re: A Demon Walks Into a Bar
« Reply #24 on: February 06, 2020, 01:27:12 PM »
He watched the demon closely for the little movements in his face and the language of his body, hatred coursing through him thick like mud. Damien's expression remained cold but he couldn't help but shift in his spot.

His soul.

Once, when he was a Christian, such a thing held meaning for him. Such a request would be unChristian, inhuman. But as he mulled over the demon's words, he thought about what Kerr Galvin had told him, about what Zeus had relayed to him.

Laurent dabbled in the trade and use of souls.

He had no idea what his own soul would be worth, nor what a demon could do with it. His instinct was to agree immediately - what was a soul to him anyway? But as he was making the decision, he paused, weighing how long it had taken Laurent to show his face, how long it had taken for the push to come to shove. He thought of the long nights with Rachel fearing for her life. What would she say if she knew he had made such a deal for her? Would he be the same? Would she still love him? Would he love her?

"Well," Damien sighed lightly, a humorless smirk pulling at one corner of his mouth. "I'm flattered that my soul means so much to you, but I think I'll pass on that, thank you."

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Re: A Demon Walks Into a Bar
« Reply #25 on: February 06, 2020, 01:28:54 PM »
Va'tamal would not be taking no for an answer.  His human skin rippled and morphed beneath the brown coat that kept the glowing gem obscured from sight.  His form took one that would be familiar, though the change did not alter the eyes.  Black was similar enough to brown.  Posture shifted into something more demure.

"Guillaume," the demon wearing Rachel's face spoke softly with a chilling rendition of her voice.  The expression on her face scared, tone a pleading whisper.  "Please."
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Re: A Demon Walks Into a Bar
« Reply #26 on: February 06, 2020, 01:41:57 PM »
Jake had decided to let Damien do most of the talking, and he did his best to withhold judgement on a hair brained scheme like a trade. His ring vibrated as Damien's aura was magnified. He felt nothing, but acted like he was put off. Lisa-Joe was actually put off, and instinctually showed her fangs. Manuel on the other side of the door, moved his eyes, but nothing more. He gave Pierre nothing but a gruff head nod.

Jake found the idea of a trade as an opportunity, but even he could not hold in his facial reaction to the idea that Damien would give his soul. He would've protested had Damien hadn't agreed to it. Rachel would kill herself in grief over Damien losing his soul over her. It was no trade at all. Laurent's twist into Rachel's visage, visibly angered Lisa-Joe. Jake felt the trick cruel, and was about to address it, but Lisa-Joe moved faster than he could think.

Her hand was around Laurent's throat, and while she knew she couldn't kill him, there was nothing against hurting him. She let her own aura turn into a monster, making the beauty Laurent once ogled into something dark and terrible. Her fangs threatened death, and her eyes burned like fire.

"Be anyone but her," she said, not caring for what anyone else thought of her at the moment, not even Jake. 
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Re: A Demon Walks Into a Bar
« Reply #27 on: February 07, 2020, 03:54:26 AM »
Damien had suspected that the demon would use such trickery - he had used it on Pierre, shifting into Nikolai's aspect back when Nikolai was working for Damien - when he had betrayed Damien. Multiple times he had reminded and prepared himself for his shift into Rachel's skin and thought himself equipped for such a deviant trick.

He was not.

His entire body stiffened and the stoney expression dropped into one of shock and anger for the briefest of moments. His hands curled inwards to fists and he leaned forward in the chair just in time to watch Lisa-Joe's lunge past him. The stiffness in his muscles made him slow, so he wasn't able to connect with her before she could put her hands around the demon's throat, nor stop the words that came from between her bared fangs.

Damien was on his feet before her sentence finished, stretching a hand out to Lisa-Joe's shoulder and grabbing it firmly in as polite of an attempt to get her to release Laurent as he could possibly muster. "While I appreciate the sentiment, Lisa-Joe," he sent into her mind forcefully, his voice unwavering in its conviction with the intent of making her release him, "this is not your place to negotiate. Back off. Now." His silver eyes were on the side of her face, and he was prepared to make her loosen her grip should she chose to disobey.

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Re: A Demon Walks Into a Bar
« Reply #28 on: February 07, 2020, 04:07:27 AM »
Still wearing Rachel's face, he allowed the fear caused by the vampiress wash over him, twisting it into his face to enhance his act.  The whimpering, painful gasps for breath and terror in the mask were meant only for Damien.  Va'tamal would have thanked Lisa-Joe for the inspiration -- it got him what he wanted anyway.  The Great Guillaume's slip of composure. 

Tears rolled down the cheeks of his mask while he waited for the intervention to take effect. 
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Re: A Demon Walks Into a Bar
« Reply #29 on: February 07, 2020, 12:02:28 PM »
Lisa-Joe turned her head quickly at Damien's touch. She was in no mood, Sam's kidnapping hitting her hard. Rachel's face was Sam to her. She was another girl she'd lost. She stared at Damien with hatred in her eyes. She was in disbelief that he would really give her an order in her own fucking home. Damien might've been in grief, but Lisa-Joe would rue the day before she let an ancient disrespect her prince, her district, and herself. She stood her ground, daring him to make her stop.

Jake rose up and banged the end of his sword of the ground like it was a cane or a staff. It reverberated through the room, and he stared at everyone with displeasure. "Lisa-Joe, take Pierre for a walk," he instructed. The Brujah looked to Jake for a moment with the same scorn she'd shown Damien, but it turned into something more regretful. She dropped Laurent to the floor (doing so in a way to make sure he couldn't land on his feet). She spit on him for good measure, unaware that the cruel pervert was likely to get off on such a gesture.

"Out my way," she said to Damien, huffing past him, and out the door. Manuel backed away slightly, and she looked at Pierre hard. "WHAT," she yelled at him.

Jake now turned to Laurent. "Trust me, I love some good theatrics, but I think you've made your point, and there's no need to be snide."

Lastly, he looked at Damien, his face filled with scorn. "I suggest we all retake our seats, and do not touch an employee of my district again." There was no debate in the words. Damien needed to remember who was allowing this conversation to take place.

"Now," he said to both of them. "I believe, Laurent, you offered to trade Damien Rachel for his soul, and he declined. Do you have a counter offer for him?"

His tone was crisp, expectant,and annoyed. He would deal with Lisa-Joe later.
Be a sadist. Now matter how sweet and innocent your leading characters, make awful things happen to them — in order that the reader may see what they are made of.
- Kurt Vonnegut Jr.


Jake Benny Kyle Lisa-Joe James/Jimmy Tess Tyler Apep Ari Lacy Mithras